France • 62 y/oReviews Given
Really enjoyed your story. Nice build-up of the characters.
Shame about a few spelling mistakes like:
house being reprocessed instead of repossessed, or taught face instead of taut (Hope you don't think that is being pernickety)
Look forward to reading more....
Fantastic!
Hope to read some more soon
Excellent story
Love it
this is beautiful!
Had me engrossed - until the very last sentence.... Not sure about the "dream-end" though I must admit..... made me swap from a 5 star to 4 star
So is his name Mark or Paul?
Otherwise I quite liked it
please find time to write some more, you have talent