Reviews Received
I'm a dude and just looking at the title scared me into believing that it would be just bashing guys, but now I see it is more about friendship and am happy about that. Having many friends that are chicks, I can actually relate to this. Usually women bond together after a heartache or a heartbreak and say, "you can do better" and, "he doesn't deserve your heart", so I totally see where you come from on this.
I like this whole astro-nature projection of imagery, if that is what you want to call it, for your world. I think I actually got lost in another dimension reading this. I'm just wonderin' what the "1:48am" title has to do with it? I'm guessing it was a dream that you've awaken from at the time or something along those lines, right?
"Life without you, cause without reason.
Touch without sense, time without season." is so beautiful. It's the kind of line that justifies itself and stands on its own. It's the kind of thing I think poetry is meant for. Thank you for bringing it into the world. <3