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"Life without you, cause without reason.
Touch without sense, time without season." is so beautiful. It's the kind of line that justifies itself and stands on its own. It's the kind of thing I think poetry is meant for. Thank you for bringing it into the world. <3
I like this whole astro-nature projection of imagery, if that is what you want to call it, for your world. I think I actually got lost in another dimension reading this. I'm just wonderin' what the "1:48am" title has to do with it? I'm guessing it was a dream that you've awaken from at the time or something along those lines, right?
Lost_Star's right! There are plenty of other guys out there who would die to love you the way that boy never could. Keep searching, you'll find them eventually! Great writing, by the way, I could really feel your emotion.