Canada • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I suffer greatly from anxiety, and hearing it explained in words got me thinking. I did feel anxiety while reading this, and it also comforted me that other people can have the same symptoms. I believe that this is a story, wether people are relating to genres when they are saying it's not or whatever.
Any who, I think it was great.
A good story. Sad that's it's based on true events. Some people have tough, hard lives for sure.
Michael.
There were a few grammar mistakes, like "seen" instead of "see," and you forgot to end the part where the narrator speaks with the ", but besides that is was beautiful and amazing. I hope you write more
I love this beautiful short story because there's not many like it. Overall, good job, but it had a few mistakes such as:
'Just than, I woke up.'
Instead it should've been;
"Just then, I woke up."
Just be sure to check it through before submitting, but nice job!
I fell in love with the idea of the story, but there are a few things you might want to work on. Some of the sentences aren't grammatically correct (Ex. Loving you, made me hate myself).
I think that finding a different way of saying "I fell in love with," would make it seem a lot more interesting and make the reader want to read more.
This is a great start and I can't wait to hear more from you!
I think this symbolizes life and love perfectly. I admire the symbolism you used with the forest - very great job.
