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This so touching, heart wrenching in a way. But it shows how it is in a way that can be understood. Fantastic job!
I think I have to agree with this. It can be hard, this is so true.
This is so true! Music has such a magnificent way of communicating not only to hearts, but our minds and our souls. It has a way of lifting us up, telling a story, and carrying us on a wave of melody. It's truly amazing...
Good story! Just noticed though that you're missing the paragraph spaces between some of the paragraphs. I hope to read the next part soon!
I think this is a beautiful outlook on life, and I love it.
Maybe I’m biased because you’re my friend, but I really enjoyed this story. It could use some grammatical editing, but overall the story was interesting and I enjoyed it.
Could be edited, but still. Wow. That was good.
I think that's the hardest part about caring so much about someone when we have to learn to move on without them. When you have to almost hold yourself together because it would seem that a fraction of your very reality has crumbled. It hurts, but you just have to keep telling yourself that it's ok.
At least, that's how I have experienced it to be.