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That was a very clever way to convey a story. It was very inspiring. Good job!
This is so true! Music has such a magnificent way of communicating not only to hearts, but our minds and our souls. It has a way of lifting us up, telling a story, and carrying us on a wave of melody. It's truly amazing...
Very different style of writing than I'm used to, probably could use some grammar touch ups, but other than that I loved it!
I´m a little bit of a Hamilton nerd because my sister used to listen to it all of the time...XD...Gotta love Hamilton
I think this is a beautiful outlook on life, and I love it.
This so touching, heart wrenching in a way. But it shows how it is in a way that can be understood. Fantastic job!
This is another amazing way to look at life, we all have trials and this poem illustrates that fact in a way all of us can appreciate.
Could be edited, but still. Wow. That was good.
I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!