Amber Jones

Wow. This was a very evocative story, good job!

I think I have to agree with this. It can be hard, this is so true.

Good story! Just noticed though that you're missing the paragraph spaces between some of the paragraphs. I hope to read the next part soon!

It was definitely a very unique and interesting take on Time travel, especially the discovery of it. I can appreciate the originality of the work. Good job!

I feel like you can't really understand because you haven't done or experienced any of those things, but as far as the literature goes, I think it's pretty good.

This is so true! Music has such a magnificent way of communicating not only to hearts, but our minds and our souls. It has a way of lifting us up, telling a story, and carrying us on a wave of melody. It's truly amazing...

I think that's the hardest part about caring so much about someone when we have to learn to move on without them. When you have to almost hold yourself together because it would seem that a fraction of your very reality has crumbled. It hurts, but you just have to keep telling yourself that it's ok.
At least, that's how I have experienced it to be.

I liked the idea behind this story! A lot of times the story is about a series of tasks that a young man has to do in order to win the lady's hand in marriage, often organized by her father, then an unlikely candidate presents himself and succeeds. So it was intriguing that the young women was directly involved with the challenge and probably initiated it herself which means she honestly wanted to get married, but also wanted to find someone who was willing to work for her hand as well as demonstrate promise of a loving and compassionate relationship.
So, yeah. This was super interesting! Good job!