United Kingdom • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This is incredible! You are so very talented! You deserve so much more than you are receiving. Keep writing and unleashing your creativity, it's beautiful!
noice :)
good one, nice work.
Great Job! :D
I like the term 'brutally hard.' You bring two very different worlds up against each other and the contrast works well.
Just one thing, you refer to the floor and it seems to be outdoors. We usually say 'ground' for the natural earth beneath our feet and 'floor' for a man-made covering. That said, people sometimes refer to the 'forest floor' and the rest of your descriptions are good.
i love it