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I love the meaning to this entry! It really makes people think about how they act, and why they act.
I loved it and am yet to find anything that might need worked on.
I can't wait to hear more from you (on this story or another)!

Great story! This story brought my heart out!

This is so good write more!

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This is really cool it has every element inside the words your right sad emotional but a feel good after.Thnks

this is really good, maybe next time it should not be as jumpy.

I for one enjoy this story greatly! It is heartwarming, yet sad. Great job!

Aw, what a lovely little tale. I really enjoyed this story. There were a couple of errors here and there, but nobody is perfect. Beautifully written, and a job well done.