United States • 25 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Thanks, (Somebody)important, you presented it eloquently.
To add to the beautiful style of writing, maybe you would accept some suggestion.
A few line breaks might have been given the reader the right pause.
The following line, (He traveled here every year on this same day, whether it was snowing or sweltering.) may need a rethink. On a given date of the same month, the weather would probably be the variation of the same, not the opposites like snowing or sweltering.
But, once again, thank you so much for such a beautiful piece of captured emotions.
grate story
I know that I'm like 2 years late reading this story but ur way of writing is outstanding this story helped me in various ways thanks for sharing this
This is just speaking to me! Amazing how you really captured those feelings in one poem.
Keep up the good work!
More poems please!
I dont know if yer serious or not, but either way its very good:)
Such a great message and good read I LOVE this!
