NorthernPhoenix

This is really good!!

I enjoyed your story. Well done.

I think the story is great and I like how you change the mood of the story slightly every time it gives a sense of evolution to the characters that would not be seen otherwise. Keep it up you are doing a great job.

Easily my favorite part of the story so far. It flows better, and the dialogue was fun and showed the characters' personalities nicely.
I'm excited for the rest.

I feel this story 👍

I really relate to this. you should reach out to this person and just let them know you're thinking of them. hope you feel better. great job with this one! :D

as someone with a passion for pretty skies and all forms of carbs, I found this wonderful! Great job <3

Excellent. I did notice the stages of grief while I was reading, but it felt smooth. The style was cohesive and I enjoyed the way you depicted how a tree might feel about things and view its life.