United States • 24 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I enjoyed your story. Well done.
I think the story is great and I like how you change the mood of the story slightly every time it gives a sense of evolution to the characters that would not be seen otherwise. Keep it up you are doing a great job.
Easily my favorite part of the story so far. It flows better, and the dialogue was fun and showed the characters' personalities nicely.
I'm excited for the rest.
I really relate to this. you should reach out to this person and just let them know you're thinking of them. hope you feel better. great job with this one! :D
This is really good!!
This used to be the story of my life. It's nice, at least, to have someone worth thinking about in this way.
I like the way this is written; how it's an analogy, but also just a fun little snippet of some gossips at a ball or whatever. It's fun to imagine what the people I know in life would wear, or what I would wear, in this world. Nice work.
Honestly I really like this poem, even if it is a bit melodramatic. I like how it's all kind of just stated as a fact, not as the speaker necessarily feeling sorry for themselves. It's an interesting idea.