Oxygen

Hurts. A good definition, but it still hurts. Pain is something we all have to deal with, but acceptance is more important. A well written poem. Describes one's nightmares well.

Everyone needs that You. And no one wants to lose them. This is every emotion people need. Lord of the Rings... Never feel this pain. Haha, inside jokes :P. Otherwise, this is relate-able on so, so many levels. Keep posting your depressing stuff on here, and I will keep reading. Talk to me if you ever feel the need to.

LOVE IT!!

Honestly amazing as so true! I honestly love this poem! Good job and keep writing!

"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.

I LOVE IT! keep up the great work!