Oxygen

Remember, don't feel bad about yourself. You are not useless! Keep on writing!
P.S.: isn't' it a needle in a haystack?

It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?

It's kinda confusing and random but mysterious. I liked it and I think you should try writing more poetry. :D

I can relate so badly. Nice poem.