Oxygen

It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?

This story gave me hope. Keep up the good work!!!!!

:D I love it!

OMG! such a good story. So creepy. Can't wait for part two.

This is so sad, but inspiring. I too have gone through tough times with my mom, but this story has inspired me to be grateful for her life. Keep on writing

I love this poem. It's truly an inspirational poem.

Lmao. This is so funny. I also would rate it ten stars if I could. :D

Ahh! SO good! Write more please write more!