Rachel Elizabeth

A delightful poem. I certainly believe in fairies and other beings of the Elemental kingdom, like dragons and unicorns. Well done.

That was so pretty!!

“trapped in a fragile hour glass
pelted by the slowly falling sand
waiting for someone to notice me
but for now
I'm lonely”

Wow. Just wow. I really like this one. Nicely done.

Yay! First of all, I love the song you’re referencing in the first couple lines. Second of all, this poem is lovely. You did good :)

Thank you for making me cry in front of my peers. This was so beautiful I don't even care. Also, in case no one has told you. I love you.

This is a good summing up of true fridndship.

Oh my goodness, I absolutely love this!!!

yessss. i love the vibes of this piece and the little snippets of imagery you get from each line. it reads like a photo montage. great job!