Reviews Given
Loved it! Amazing! I can't wait to read more of it.
Excellent! I want MORE!!!
Mind-blowing descriptions.
It's a very meanngful poem which (poetically) makes us realise how bad times have become. Time flies...
Oh! That started out so mournful and then ended up absolutely thrilling! Can't wait to read more (if there's more, that is)!!!
I loved your writing style. So far your story has a good pacing. :-)
Really helpful!
Simply amazing! Brilliant. A poor child's innocence... Abusive Father... Helpless mother... Every single thing is so subtly conveyed with so little text. Children have the amazing ability to speak cute and short.
Truly magnificent. I am speechless. Yes, we are blind. We see what's outside, and are blind to what's inside. External beauty charms us, but often truly it might not be beautiful inside. To a blind man, what's inside attracts him. In reality, we with sight are blinder than the ones with no sight.