Bangladesh • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Truly magnificent. I am speechless. Yes, we are blind. We see what's outside, and are blind to what's inside. External beauty charms us, but often truly it might not be beautiful inside. To a blind man, what's inside attracts him. In reality, we with sight are blinder than the ones with no sight.
Oh! That started out so mournful and then ended up absolutely thrilling! Can't wait to read more (if there's more, that is)!!!
I loved your writing style. So far your story has a good pacing. :-)
Really helpful!
Excellent! I want MORE!!!
Excellent!
Indeed, it can be observed that the greatest of men treat the physically disabled/challenged harshly. The entire society views them as useless brats born to die without honour.
This piece of writing briefly describes this bitter and cruel truth in elegant words.
But, there are some mistakes present in the writing.
"...as painful and anything inflicted by a real weapon."
In many instances, you forget the Oxford Comma.
Simply amazing! Brilliant. A poor child's innocence... Abusive Father... Helpless mother... Every single thing is so subtly conveyed with so little text. Children have the amazing ability to speak cute and short.