United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Your writing style is beautiful. The foreshadowing to the sad twist at the end was really well done. Great job :)
I love this story, and I can not wait to read part three!
this is soooo good!!!
u should write more like this!
luv it completly!!!!
The superhero man saves the day, defeats the bad guy, and gets the girl in most of the movies (not that I've seen very many).
especially this part, i laughed so hard
this was so good! you're awesome at writing descriptively!
excited for part 3!
Your story is awesome! All your pieces of writing have been sooooo amazing and well put together. I'm kind of jelly... ;) So excited for Part 3!!!
I love this!! again, the detail is amazing! I cannot wait for part 3! keep up the good work