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LOVE your style of writing! you are very good at it

You're a really good writer and I can't wait until part 2! Love the detail :)

Wow, I really like your story so far! Your really good at this, keep up the good work! <3

luv it completly!!!!
The superhero man saves the day, defeats the bad guy, and gets the girl in most of the movies (not that I've seen very many).
especially this part, i laughed so hard

I love this story, and I can not wait to read part three!

Wow, this was really deep. I really enjoyed reading your story! Poor Eugene though; he seemed rather passionate about Ruth. I can't wait to read more of what you write! :)

Your writing style is beautiful. The foreshadowing to the sad twist at the end was really well done. Great job :)

I love this!! again, the detail is amazing! I cannot wait for part 3! keep up the good work