SamZ

i love it

I really really like it but You could have added a sentence or 2 describing his reaction.
or maybe a sequal.

I need a sequel! You don't have to, of course, but I am interested to see what you can come up with.

wow. noice.

aaaah i love it

sam its a really good start. cant wait to read the next part.

it is a really good writing

damn bro that hit hard right after you said "I would love to know that heaven is like <3"