United Arab Emirates • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
the second line would make for sense if you said
Little do you know that one day,you will be here no more
the third line
One day you will be dead, departed
You have a nice english vocabulary you just need to work on it a little more
that brought tears to my eyes, daymn, that sad. its soo good thou
Nice. It's sad that things like that actually happen.
very good ðŸ˜
(｡ Ì︿ ̀｡) this story is so sad, yet so sweet and inspiring. Keep it up! I love ur work!
That hit HARD. I'm almost not okay withthe levels of pure emotion pouring off of this. The only thing I'd change is how fast the death happened. Maybe if he tried to get her to open the door, then shrugged it off, but then later, like at dinner, he breaks the door.
But wow, I physically hurt at that ending, as well as all throughout. Bullying is not okay in any circumstance, not okay for or from any person, and harmful 100% of the time, if only on a subconscious level.
Keep writing! I love this.