SamZ

it is a really good writing

Beautifully done. I found this part very moving: 'Ronnie’s learned to walk. She’s up to all sorts of mischief now.' You manage to evoke sympathy for not only your main character but also for the father of such young children. And for the mother who is never going to see her children growing up.

Lost
Ordinary
very
existing

It so sad but so goe

damn bro that hit hard right after you said "I would love to know that heaven is like <3"

Sad but beautifully done. You evoke the voice of a small child very well.