I love emotive stories like this. Good job - keep up the good work!
Definitely something I'd want to read to children at night. Well done and keep up the great poetry.
I agree with Fate that it's good. It's something that you can certainly build upon. The one thing that I wished for, though, is something more finished. It feels like the beginning of something. Something good, perhaps? I, personally, like conclusions or cleverly open-ended stories that leave me with thought.
A humorous poem about tax, tax, and more tax.
This funny short story is one to tell your friends at a social.
This touches my strange sense of humour. I found this to be very funny!
Thank you for your submission. You are a talented writer.
Thank you for the well-written story.