United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
There were a couple of if's amid a few sentences like when the protagonist introduces his name. I think the story's details are over-explained. Other I think the plot is kinda good but needs more working on it.
But what happened to our boi, Biggus Dickus and the Genitile Crew?!
YO GREAT STORY BRO
This story really made me laugh and I have read it many times I wish you the best!
I accidentally read the second one first but i love them both
Can't believe you are only 14, I remember writing my first book except it was with pencil and paper obviously. I'm old