United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
YO GREAT STORY BRO
WOW!!!!!
This story really made me laugh and I have read it many times I wish you the best!
I love the second one just as much as the first!
I accidentally read the second one first but i love them both
Can't believe you are only 14, I remember writing my first book except it was with pencil and paper obviously. I'm old
It cant get any better that this
There were a couple of if's amid a few sentences like when the protagonist introduces his name. I think the story's details are over-explained. Other I think the plot is kinda good but needs more working on it.