United States • 57 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I agree with Andy(Formally Apemann) although I think you deserve a 5 star rather than 3 stars. Great job on the story and keep writing!
I'm not really sure what to make of your poem. Not that it's bad, because it isn't. It's just..., well... ODD :-) It doesn't seem to fit any conventional poetry style, which is no bad thing either. Ah well, there's nothing wrong in being different - and this poem is certainly that!
Some large philosophical questions :-) Nicely written and presented.