Selena Joan

I like it!

Really good!

I like it and I like that you used animals instead of humans, can't wait to read the rest!

This was the first story i read when i first joined this site. I love it and hope you continue to write more. I can't believe Dawn just left him like that haha!

I loved it! Very well written, think it's interesting that it comes from personal experience as well!

It's really well written honestly. Just hope you're okay! :)

Amazing!

I loved it! And I agree with Matt, I don't think you need to add anything else to this.