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This is so meaningful, I feel like I'm being taken through someone's life, and you are telling us very simply what happened but it is so deep!

this was really interesting and it got me inspired! nice

no words...literal chills tho...

Hey, it's nice. I like it. It's a first step towards an army of greatness! You did a good job, I can kinda picture myself there. I get the flashes, ya know? Still, next attempt will be better. Practice practice practice! Keep writing! We will keep reading.

Amazing! especially as it's your first short story, I am impressed

This speaks to me more than i want to. And yeah, it's the worst feeling that a person can ever feel. But at least you get to move on. You get to find someone new, someone better. And hopefully they won't tear the heart out again. Things will get better. They have to. Every down has its up. Every trough has its crest. Keep writing, we will keep reading.