United States • 24 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
A very sad but unfortunately accurate look into the nature of human interaction.
I wished for more of a rant.
Sad but a legit question to ask of an ex
Great Story! Love it
I feel like it was kind of rushed, but it was still a very good story :) It left me speechless too
Does heartache make one a monster? In that case the world is only populated by monsters, which is a bit ... untrue.
Interesting vignette. Read up on how dialogue punctuation works in fiction because it's incorrect here.
I agree with your response to Appeman. Sometimes critism can take a sharp turn, stab you in the back, and leave you bleeding inside.
Besides a few grammar errors, it's great! I wanna hear a ton more from this! It's a great start! Please, please, please continue!!!!
-KP