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TheForgotten

TheForgotten is from US United States • 24 y/o • Female

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed Margret Spade 1

Sounds great, but may I ask, why did you say it was so important to you? In might be butting in a bit but I'm naturally curious.

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed A Maltreated Child

Great job. Really rendered me speechless (which is hard to do)

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed Check Mate

Love it! Understand it completely! (Except the rum part, i don't want to ever drink alchol). Great job!

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed I'll Come for You Part 2

Sounds great, trust me. The parts could be a little longer but besides that I believe that you're all good👍🏻

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed Nightmare Valley

Holy cow!! That's great!! Are you going to write more? When you're talking about wondering if the dude is hung to split her in half you accidentally say my instead of me, but besides that I found no more errors.

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed Maladaptive Daydreaming

That's almost definitly me! I daydream continuously but I don't think that it's that big. I can snap out of it if I want to, but I usually don't want to. Great work!!
-KP

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed Not Enough

The ending sounds great but doesn't really finish feeling satisfied.... I think it's because there isn't a rhyme there, but I don't know for sure. Keep writing!

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed Monster

Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!

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