United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!
I think Apeman (sorry if I got the name wrong) is partially right. A series of sad stories isn't bad when you know that you can produce happier, livelier stories that make your heart swell or eyes tear. I think that the story was amazing and I know that you continued with it because I saw the titles for the next ones, so good job!
-KP
Wow, that was cool. You think you are going to write more? That would be awesome. I'm hooked. :) -Kaleigh
PART 5 PLEASE PART 5!!!
Holy cow!! That's great!! Are you going to write more? When you're talking about wondering if the dude is hung to split her in half you accidentally say my instead of me, but besides that I found no more errors.
That's almost definitly me! I daydream continuously but I don't think that it's that big. I can snap out of it if I want to, but I usually don't want to. Great work!!
-KP
