United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I think Apeman (sorry if I got the name wrong) is partially right. A series of sad stories isn't bad when you know that you can produce happier, livelier stories that make your heart swell or eyes tear. I think that the story was amazing and I know that you continued with it because I saw the titles for the next ones, so good job!
-KP
Wow, that was cool. You think you are going to write more? That would be awesome. I'm hooked. :) -Kaleigh
PART 5 PLEASE PART 5!!!
Holy cow!! That's great!! Are you going to write more? When you're talking about wondering if the dude is hung to split her in half you accidentally say my instead of me, but besides that I found no more errors.
That's almost definitly me! I daydream continuously but I don't think that it's that big. I can snap out of it if I want to, but I usually don't want to. Great work!!
-KP
I love it.
Keep it exactly how it is.
It's perfect.
Need a friend?
This is beautifully painful and true all at the same time.
Beautiful. I can relate entirely to this. I had to deal with an evil boy and a bratty girl who just happened to be dating at the time. The boy threatened to kill me once and the girl was just full-on two-faced.