TheForgotten

I keep reading all of your writing and I feel like I'm looking for the other half to my heart in your writing. So amazing!!

this was amazing.

Love this! I have felt like this so many times and am in love with this writing!

This really hit me hard! Its so true the world breaks our heart with the fiction and the boy just does what the world doesn't prepare you for!

I love this story

Lovely!! You vividly take the reader into the journey, sharing the moments and the places.
Maybe some para breaks would have been better but this comment of mine should not distract you from your creative, and beautifully captured, writing.