United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Some more plz! Love your work!
I feel bad for the child in the story, it isn't fair that some got the best parents and some get none or some that hated them with a passion! I love it.
Oooh... stalker alert! Exciting to read, well done!
This is a really cool poem. I often get pretty okay/good grades and I am never the best at anything. I always feel like I am in second place.
It's sad and lonely. It bleeds emotion, and is just so perfectly... I don't know how to describe it. Honestly, this is how I feel about all of my friendships. This always happens. This was just written so well, so exactly how it is.
i feel like if you had just tried to take a little more time to mabey add some rhymes in there then it might become more gripping.
