United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I can definitely relate to this. I've been there and still am most days. Hang in there.
Holy crap my heart just broke. Thanks!! 😜. Great story and I hope you continue!
Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!
The ending sounds great but doesn't really finish feeling satisfied.... I think it's because there isn't a rhyme there, but I don't know for sure. Keep writing!
That's almost definitly me! I daydream continuously but I don't think that it's that big. I can snap out of it if I want to, but I usually don't want to. Great work!!
-KP
Holy cow!! That's great!! Are you going to write more? When you're talking about wondering if the dude is hung to split her in half you accidentally say my instead of me, but besides that I found no more errors.