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TheForgotten

TheForgotten is from US United States • 17 y/o • Female

When no one else listens, write.

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To Live Eternally by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

I really liked this, it flows well. Good job! :)

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Vanity Fair by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

You did an amazing job at pulling the reader into the scene, it was lovely :)

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A Weird Way To Start Learning A New Language by Roberto Perez

Very inspiring story, you are doing a great job!

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A Sheet of Paper by Aithne Beauchene

That was very lovely. I like the soft tone to it and it flows nicely. A job well done!

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Like a Bullet by Andraaknas

I really enjoyed this, I think the structure was well put together and word usage was great. I hope to see more from you in the future!

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The Tallest Tree by Thomas Ray

I really love the idea and how you executed it. Description was lovely and really drew the reader in. The only problem I saw was in the "light" it was difficult to keep up without any previous context to the story. A prologue could help with that. Overall I thought it was very good and I hope you continue it!

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My Mental Breakdown by 19danwes

It is easy to understand why you were upset. It is easy to feel like no one cares, we all experience that, it's a part of life. But the important part is knowing that there is always going to be someone who will care. It is unfortunate how your mother reacted to the situation, but perhaps she is just as afraid as you are. Hang in there!

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My Mind by Ghost

I liked it, it was interesting. The flow was a little bumpy here and there, but overall it was good.

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