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TheForgotten

TheForgotten is from US United States • 22 y/o • Female

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A Sheet of Paper by Aithne Beauchene

That was very lovely. I like the soft tone to it and it flows nicely. A job well done!

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A Weird Way To Start Learning A New Language by Roberto Perez

Very inspiring story, you are doing a great job!

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This Story Has Been Removed. This Story Has Been Removed. This Story by DRayVan

The story was well written and the story keeps the reader's attention well. A job well done. And thank you for your service.

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Humans Above The Bed by 🌸Fate

I really loved the idea for this story. I like how instead of the "creatures under our beds" being the monsters a human is. One little flaw I noticed was it was somewhat hard to identify which creature was which (I may just have a hard time keeping up though), but overall I really liked it. I hope to see more!

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Brainwashed by Author21

Very well written. It really gets to the reader and allows for them to feel something. Great job!

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The Tallest Tree by Thomas Ray

I really love the idea and how you executed it. Description was lovely and really drew the reader in. The only problem I saw was in the "light" it was difficult to keep up without any previous context to the story. A prologue could help with that. Overall I thought it was very good and I hope you continue it!

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Your Fault by NobodyImportant

Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job

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Black Chronicles Character Interview by Sherzahd

Personally I felt the story was absolutely amazing. The idea was great, and the characters were fantastic, there's a lot of detail to each of their personalities. Good job! I look forward to future stories.

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