TheForgotten

Wow. Topic was great and the execution of it was fantastic. Lovely work.

I really liked this poem, it flowed well and it had a sweet mother like feel to it. I believe it's a very relate able topic, suicide is often thought about daily for some. Good job!

I really liked this story. I love how you incorporated well known characters from a vast amount of children's stories into an investigation to figure out what really happened to Humpty. Brilliant!

I really liked this, it flows well. Good job! :)

I really liked this particular piece. The story line was cute, and I know I'll probably sound silly but reading this just made me happy. Very well done.

I really enjoyed this poem. I hope to see more of your peices in the future.

I would love it if you continued this series. The entries aren't quite as long as what would be most suitable but they're fine considering they're the very first few. I like how this story is going along and I'd like to see more.

I liked it, it was cute and the rhyme was good