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Optimism101

United States • 21 y/o • Male

"If you don't have any festivity and just have negativity then there's no chance you'll make it far in life" Kevin- C Students

Reviews Received

This was written so well! I loved it! Keep on writing!

9 Apr, 2019 0

I feel your pain through this poem. It's very deep and I can totally relate. Talk to me if you need to. Keep on writing! :D

8 Apr, 2019 0

I love this poem. Keep on writing!

8 Apr, 2019 0

aw, so sweet!

8 Apr, 2019 0

wow, this touched me! i was doing my math (mostly) and reading this and my pencil fell out of my hand. Depressing, but passionate.

2 Apr, 2019 0

Although this story is really good, I think if you just had the first one it would be better. This is just my opinion though.

1 Apr, 2019 0

This is an amazing poem. I love how you expressed your feelings in the way of a flower(if that makes any sense).

31 Mar, 2019 0

It's pretty good. You just have to continue to work on the poetry, but that can be fixed. Nice work!

27 Mar, 2019 0

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