United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Metaphor or an actual dilemma of yours?
amazing as always, very relatable, and sad. im glad you no longer feel this way. but ik these things never fully go away. good for you for writing about it. we all love reading it.
Awwwwe you poor soul -sends virtual love- I’m so glad this isn’t you anymore. Good job overcoming it and writing this astounding poem/musing/whatever the hell it is!
Hey, I used to be like that. Sometimes I still am like that. I'm glad you got through this. It's a very good poem.
wow, amazing as always, this is like really relatable and I love it so much. it sounds so real, like you just dug up your heart from deep in your soul and slapped it on paper with all its beauty. amazing.
Oof I love this, why do I feel like I’d tell a story like this when I’m old? Anyways great job love, keep it up! <3
- a message from Salty Mama
Ahhhh yes, I do hope you finish this story for it is one of greatness and has lots of potential, now if and when you finish it, I shall find a bard to write a song about it because I feel as if that is only fair for a warrior such as this one.
Great story overall, really love it and can't wait for the next part.
Break ups hurt, and I understand