Optimism101

It's not... not that bad. I mean, you tried. THat's most that counts. Nice little baby thriller. You could probably scare a squirrel.
No hard Feelings

Okay, so I think that you should do whatever the heck you want. Like, if you feel the need to write, write. etc.
However in this specific instance you are asking for my opinion.
In which case here it is.
I, personally, would love it if you wrote more. I try to get as much content read and reviewed as I can, and more work just makes it better, gives me more to do, and lets me see more about the people on this site, as well as provide a larger array of stories.
That's my opinion, but in all honesty,
Do whatever you want.

Dawww, sits so cute! Awww. Love it! Love that ending!

Op. Sounds like he had a good meal. I liked it. Very... dog. Dog. Anyways, I really like it! Write more if you wanna!

You shouldn't wonder those stupid.... wait.... this is an autobiography?!?!?!?! NO! Hey! People wonder, people care. People out there will always worry and wonder for you. It's a sad musing, and makes everyone think, but still. HEY! People care. They always will.

I like it. you have an interesting inn, with an interesting story. I personally hope that we get to see more of the inn, however, you are more likely to talk about the king's story, and that will be interesting too. Can't wait for the next part! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Well, whoever that is, they better as hell never leave.