Optimism101

"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.

"I have all the time in the world" Waiting. A simple, short poem about waiting. And a devastatingly long wait that is. Nice poem

Everyone needs that You. And no one wants to lose them. This is every emotion people need. Lord of the Rings... Never feel this pain. Haha, inside jokes :P. Otherwise, this is relate-able on so, so many levels. Keep posting your depressing stuff on here, and I will keep reading. Talk to me if you ever feel the need to.

OOop. Now we are getting somewhere. One last question, times 4, where are they going? Where did he come from? Where did he go? Where did he come from cotton eye joe?

Huh.... Was not expecting that.....
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Nice story.
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Not much else to say, sorry

(Repeat what I stated in the first review of this series) I can't come up with more original content XD

(Repeat what I stated in the first review for this series)

Apparently, all you write is cliffhangers! Gah! Keep writing! Sooooooooooooo many questions, so many mysteries, I bet one day you will write a story that is completely just un-answered questions, and it will be like 10 pages! Oh wait, there are more parts XD. I'll get to those. In the meantime, nice premise