Reviews Given
Very fun and comedic.
It's really good! If you want to try and make it better, I reccomend adding more descriptions, to help me picture. Maybe more details about the lake, or him.
I can only think sad thoughts ;-;
Awwww, a love poem grounded in reality. You can't get much better than that.
dang.... ;-;
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It's not... not that bad. I mean, you tried. THat's most that counts. Nice little baby thriller. You could probably scare a squirrel.
No hard Feelings
Wow, Thanks! It actually helps. Thanks a lot!