Optimism101

Another good part to the series. I mean, well written. I wouldn't really call it a "happy" story cus... you know. Abuse. Yeah. Still. Well written, nicely played. Can't wait for the next bit! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

HEY! No self hate! You are an amazing human being, I can already tell. You have so much to look after in your life. Don't waste the fun times feeling down for yourself. But... I'm also here to review the work. It's good, fits its purpose, and well written. BUT STILL! Be nice to yourself. Please.

Op. It's a nice story, poem? I think it could easily work on both levels. Anyways, I like it! I can't truly relate, but I know people who live this sort of life, and the redemption is great, but beforehand it is absolutely terrible. I hope the lifestyle does not pertain to your profile name :P. Anyways(again), I think it was nicely written, and overall, I liked it! Definitely can change someone's thought process. Well, I think that's enough of a review for now. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Awww, I love the happy story :P. It's nice! Very peppy :). Keep writing! We will keep reading.

I... I'm sorry. Nobody deserves that. This poem is heavy. Tough, and hurts. But... it is very well written. The lyrics ring deep and resound withing. It's a sad poem, but a beautiful one.

"Never give up, up up. Never let go go go. Never give up. Never let go. You can reach your end goal."
-Pewdiepie, 2016
It's a nice poem that transverses a sad story. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

OOOoooOOOooOOOOoOOOooooOO! (segment preferably read with as much teen voice cracks as possible) I wonder where he came from! Well, that's obvious. I can't wait to hear more! Oh! Please make more, cliffhangers and un-ended stories suuuuuuck. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading

It's some good fluff. The flashback is in amazing detail, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or the past. ()-() It's a nice story. Not sure who lit the fire though. Mom, daughter, or son. Who knows? Keep writing! We will keep reading!