United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Wow. That is an awesome poem! Well, awesome in working, not in content, because the content is kinda sad and everything but... you know what, I'll stop. It is very well written, and flows very easily. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
OOOoooOOOooOOOOoOOOooooOO! (segment preferably read with as much teen voice cracks as possible) I wonder where he came from! Well, that's obvious. I can't wait to hear more! Oh! Please make more, cliffhangers and un-ended stories suuuuuuck. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading
Some more plz! Love your work!
Op. It's a nice story, poem? I think it could easily work on both levels. Anyways, I like it! I can't truly relate, but I know people who live this sort of life, and the redemption is great, but beforehand it is absolutely terrible. I hope the lifestyle does not pertain to your profile name :P. Anyways(again), I think it was nicely written, and overall, I liked it! Definitely can change someone's thought process. Well, I think that's enough of a review for now. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
GRRRR! Still there are questions unanswered! You are an attention grabber for sure. At least one more part. One more question answered.
That... it seems happy, but then I read again, and I get kinda sad :P.
Anyways, I like it! It's simplistic, but not, you know what I mean?
I hope you keep writing! We will keep reading!
Apparently, all you write is cliffhangers! Gah! Keep writing! Sooooooooooooo many questions, so many mysteries, I bet one day you will write a story that is completely just un-answered questions, and it will be like 10 pages! Oh wait, there are more parts XD. I'll get to those. In the meantime, nice premise
This speaks to me more than i want to. And yeah, it's the worst feeling that a person can ever feel. But at least you get to move on. You get to find someone new, someone better. And hopefully they won't tear the heart out again. Things will get better. They have to. Every down has its up. Every trough has its crest. Keep writing, we will keep reading.