Reviews Given
(Repeat what I stated in the first review for this series)
Hey, it's nice. I like it. It's a first step towards an army of greatness! You did a good job, I can kinda picture myself there. I get the flashes, ya know? Still, next attempt will be better. Practice practice practice! Keep writing! We will keep reading.
(Repeat what I stated in the first review of this series) I can't come up with more original content XD
Huh.... Was not expecting that.....
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Nice story.
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Not much else to say, sorry
Nice one. I like this story, cus it discusses the basic point of "We're fucked" But also adds a nice alien bit. Helps put everything in perspective, and summarizes our current state pretty nicely. Nice one.
OOop. Now we are getting somewhere. One last question, times 4, where are they going? Where did he come from? Where did he go? Where did he come from cotton eye joe?
Everyone needs that You. And no one wants to lose them. This is every emotion people need. Lord of the Rings... Never feel this pain. Haha, inside jokes :P. Otherwise, this is relate-able on so, so many levels. Keep posting your depressing stuff on here, and I will keep reading. Talk to me if you ever feel the need to.
I like another part. meeting the mentor. And kicking him in the nuts. That's cool too.