United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Wow. That is an awesome poem! Well, awesome in working, not in content, because the content is kinda sad and everything but... you know what, I'll stop. It is very well written, and flows very easily. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Oof. Sorry, old habit. ANYWAYS, It's a nice story. It makes a character and a world in which unknown details are filled in by the original song. Also, the OP is kinda a jerk. He was getting married to someone and left her. It seems like an endless cycle, with the fiance being the new Op. Otherwise, it's a nicely written story with much emotions. Keep writing! We will keep reading.
Well, whoever that is, they better as hell never leave.
I like it. you have an interesting inn, with an interesting story. I personally hope that we get to see more of the inn, however, you are more likely to talk about the king's story, and that will be interesting too. Can't wait for the next part! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
You shouldn't wonder those stupid.... wait.... this is an autobiography?!?!?!?! NO! Hey! People wonder, people care. People out there will always worry and wonder for you. It's a sad musing, and makes everyone think, but still. HEY! People care. They always will.