Optimism101

You shouldn't wonder those stupid.... wait.... this is an autobiography?!?!?!?! NO! Hey! People wonder, people care. People out there will always worry and wonder for you. It's a sad musing, and makes everyone think, but still. HEY! People care. They always will.

Op. Sounds like he had a good meal. I liked it. Very... dog. Dog. Anyways, I really like it! Write more if you wanna!

Dawww, sits so cute! Awww. Love it! Love that ending!

Okay, so I think that you should do whatever the heck you want. Like, if you feel the need to write, write. etc.
However in this specific instance you are asking for my opinion.
In which case here it is.
I, personally, would love it if you wrote more. I try to get as much content read and reviewed as I can, and more work just makes it better, gives me more to do, and lets me see more about the people on this site, as well as provide a larger array of stories.
That's my opinion, but in all honesty,
Do whatever you want.

It's not... not that bad. I mean, you tried. THat's most that counts. Nice little baby thriller. You could probably scare a squirrel.
No hard Feelings

I like it! Genetic modification has wonders on a universe, not only that but you have managed to turn them into soldiers, it's wonderful! Very interesting. Shows everything from her perspective too, she hates what she is, what she's doing, but is powerless to stop it, whether by choice or force. That is at least how I see it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Ohhhh boy. This is a good intro! It actually sets up a nice haunted-house-ghostbusters-luigi's-mansion-scooby-doo sorta story. Many different paths open, and many different options ahead.
However you say it's gonna have murder and stuff.
So scrap all that and replace it with some deep crap. Maybe some Us, and stuffs.
Otherwise, you got a nice setup!
Keep writing! And we will keep reading!

THat's a sweet story! It looks like it's from the perspective of a sheltered kid. But, if not, then it's still pretty sweet! Setting it up as either a story for a devilish world, or one of sheltered children. Who knows? (Well, of course you do, I mean, you wrote this)
But, I love it! Keep writing! We will keep reading!