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TheValhallan is from US United States • 20 y/o • Male

"If you don't have any festivity and just have negativity then there's no chance you'll make it far in life" Kevin- C Students

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Forever as Two by tayloremilyadaros

That... it seems happy, but then I read again, and I get kinda sad :P.
Anyways, I like it! It's simplistic, but not, you know what I mean?
I hope you keep writing! We will keep reading!

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This Feeling by tayloremilyadaros

I love this! I can never say this in reality, but you summarize it up and make it look so easily. I love it! I love it so much! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

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The Unknown Girl (Pt 4) by Tiffany

I like another part. meeting the mentor. And kicking him in the nuts. That's cool too.

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The Conversation by magnamata

Nice one. I like this story, cus it discusses the basic point of "We're fucked" But also adds a nice alien bit. Helps put everything in perspective, and summarizes our current state pretty nicely. Nice one.

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Counting Sheep by scorp

It's a good one! I like it, but then again, I kinda like everything. Guess that's just kinda how this works :P.

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Rise by scorp

Nice lyrics, king of anything is a goodie. I like it... and don't. I mean, it's always nice to have this sort of song, but hate needs to be forgived :P. You will probs gladly proove me wrong, but it's just what I think.

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Waves by scorp

Okay, well, it's not that bad per se. I mean it might not be the best piece but it is no where near the worst.
I enjoyed it

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I Miss You by tayloremilyadaros

*Imagine like a slow clap but a little faster cus I'm not gonna be rude but not fast enough to provoke excitement, but instead at that perfect "That was beautiful"*
I get it so much its crazy
It's amazing and relatable, which is THE feeling you wanna give in a poem.
Good job

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