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TheValhallan is from US United States • 20 y/o • Male

"If you don't have any festivity and just have negativity then there's no chance you'll make it far in life" Kevin- C Students

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Writing by scorp

haha you have writers block
Okay sorry I just needed to say that.
First off, I liked what you did with the whole writing thing, where everything is like that.
But also like for real that happens all the time with me too XD.
Good job!

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Rise by scorp

Nice lyrics, king of anything is a goodie. I like it... and don't. I mean, it's always nice to have this sort of song, but hate needs to be forgived :P. You will probs gladly proove me wrong, but it's just what I think.

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I Wonder by Tiffany

You shouldn't wonder those stupid.... wait.... this is an autobiography?!?!?!?! NO! Hey! People wonder, people care. People out there will always worry and wonder for you. It's a sad musing, and makes everyone think, but still. HEY! People care. They always will.

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Hello? by Dari Poulson

Just Monika

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fingertips by scorp

Its a good piece. The way the monster is described as being one and none is very interesting. To be honest I had to re-read a bit because I read the last line with a British accent and I was pretty sure that wasn't how it was supposed to go down, but that doesn't throw the quality down in any way.
gg

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The Crash by Addie

Short, sweet, and impactful.

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Seventh Trap by Justice_Dolly

Intriguing, leaves the reader wanting more. Keep writing!

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Why Can't I Be Me? by Addie

That was inspiring. Gives a message that just tells the world that you do what you want. Truly inspirational.

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