Optimism101

I can relate to this. Maybe not directly, but from a different point of view. It's sad to see what I don't, to know the side I will never see. I can't imagine the pain it would bring. On another note, it expresses the sadness, the hurt, the pain, everything. It shows every second of the event, and it hurts. It really does. I feel so bad for a fictional character. It is well worded, I wasn't able to find mistakes easily, and its amazing. I hope you keep writing And as long as you do, I will keep reading.

Wow you truly are becoming a good author. You still have a path to get there, but its closer than ever before

Nice piece

Another good part to the series. I mean, well written. I wouldn't really call it a "happy" story cus... you know. Abuse. Yeah. Still. Well written, nicely played. Can't wait for the next bit! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

HEY! No self hate! You are an amazing human being, I can already tell. You have so much to look after in your life. Don't waste the fun times feeling down for yourself. But... I'm also here to review the work. It's good, fits its purpose, and well written. BUT STILL! Be nice to yourself. Please.

ooooooo, romance! These stories always get to me, and have a special place in my heart. Not only that but it was wonderfully written! The characters are all their own, not different faces to the same person. Well, in some ways. I can't wait for more!

"Never give up, up up. Never let go go go. Never give up. Never let go. You can reach your end goal."
-Pewdiepie, 2016
It's a nice poem that transverses a sad story. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I... I'm sorry. Nobody deserves that. This poem is heavy. Tough, and hurts. But... it is very well written. The lyrics ring deep and resound withing. It's a sad poem, but a beautiful one.

Awww, I love the happy story :P. It's nice! Very peppy :). Keep writing! We will keep reading.