Optimism101

It's... blood boiling. I swear to god if I get my hands on that son of a bi-... Nope, gotta keep it PG. Still. It's a nice story. I think it could be polished a bit, but it's very close to perfect. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

It's a good poem. Sums up quite a lot. I... I don't really know what else to say. I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Another nice part to another nice series, can't wait for the next bit!

Another great part to a series! Adds more description about Ren, and sets him up for greater stuff later! (Personal predictions. My friends hate movie nights with me) Still so many questions unanswered, but I'm sure they will be answered due time. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

A nice creeps story. Gives chills. I feel it could use another draft though! Just some simple stuff, the basic more description stuff, less I's, etc. But other than that, you have a nice premise, and a nice creeps story. You're so close! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Alright. You and your "four review" Thing. I don't care if I have to force three of my friends online or not to review I WILL read the next section! WIth the predictions. I see a bit more... humanity from the characters in this section, but also that crippling darkness eminating from Mistress Silver. Lef and Turin... Not sure what to feel about them. I liked this segment. We learn more, and she is starting to get suspicious of the place. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Another good part to the series. I mean, well written. I wouldn't really call it a "happy" story cus... you know. Abuse. Yeah. Still. Well written, nicely played. Can't wait for the next bit! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

HEY! No self hate! You are an amazing human being, I can already tell. You have so much to look after in your life. Don't waste the fun times feeling down for yourself. But... I'm also here to review the work. It's good, fits its purpose, and well written. BUT STILL! Be nice to yourself. Please.